"Text-based adventure game" is certainly a title that describes the game at its core. :)
There are still a few typos. A little more punctuation would be great too. Some sentences are quite long and with long sentences it sometimes gets a bit harder to follow their meaning and so you sometimes have to re-read them, which could be avoided with a few commas or full stops. This is of course my personal preference and not necessarily that of other players/readers.
Nice introduction to a choose-your-own-adventure game. I especially like the option to just stay put at the beginning. That was a nice touch. You should definitely give textbased games another try in the future.
Thanks for playing my game and yes i agree there are lot of improvement need to be made and if i have time in the future i will give this kind of game another try.
Really cool game! The story was pretty fun. I stayed in the room :). After that finished the game.
I found one bug: Whenever you end up on a continue screen or the screen where's only one choice(the screen after you pressed 1 three times), you can still press 2. If you do that the text dissappears and you have to restart the game.
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Nice game, I died from the bad choices i made in the game, but i enjoyed the journey.
thanks for playing my game and yes there are a few choices that are definitely bad and result in the death of your character lol.
"Text-based adventure game" is certainly a title that describes the game at its core. :)
There are still a few typos. A little more punctuation would be great too. Some sentences are quite long and with long sentences it sometimes gets a bit harder to follow their meaning and so you sometimes have to re-read them, which could be avoided with a few commas or full stops. This is of course my personal preference and not necessarily that of other players/readers.
Nice introduction to a choose-your-own-adventure game. I especially like the option to just stay put at the beginning. That was a nice touch. You should definitely give textbased games another try in the future.
Thanks for playing my game and yes i agree there are lot of improvement need to be made and if i have time in the future i will give this kind of game another try.
Really cool game! The story was pretty fun. I stayed in the room :). After that finished the game.
I found one bug: Whenever you end up on a continue screen or the screen where's only one choice(the screen after you pressed 1 three times), you can still press 2. If you do that the text dissappears and you have to restart the game.
Luckily you have enough time to fix that
There are some spelling mistakes.
hey, thanks for playing my game.
about the bug, it only happens in the WebGL version and not in the desktop build or in Unity editor so I have no idea how to fix that.
and I also fixed some spelling mistakes that I overlooked.
The bug is fixed i spent soo much time trying to fix that turns out chat gpt fixed it for me in just 5 minutes